the body. Also, the first paragraph of the body does not have the topic sentence, so it makes readers confused about its main idea. In addition, some paragraphs have some sentences which do not support the main ideas. For example, paragraph two discusses native teachers’ characteristics but sentences five and six of it mention the unequal treatment between native and non-native English teachers. Moreover, the conclusion is not clear since it contains the ideas which are referred on the body paragraph
High-mass in the stars means they live fast and die young, using fuel at a high rate to keep the high temperatures. And this causes the stars to eject hot radiation that is a blueish color. Repeat support until done: A red colored star is a part in the galaxy with some old stars. The high-mass stars are puffed and cooled, and after nothing happened to the low-mass stars, they both eject cool radiation that is a reddish color. Fact 1: A red/pink patched
unknown. She gave her opinion about junk food based on her experiences. For example, in the first paragraph where the author started her sentence
going to explore the sea, but his mother in addition to his wife does not support his decision. Through the hard times as well as the difficulties, John Redding finally finds his way to sea. In the begging of the short story John Redding starts off as a young boy (at the age of ten) wanting to travel to sea. John spent his time throwing twigs into the St. John River, watching as the twigs sailed away to Jacksonville (paragraph 6. While watching the twigs he noticed that some of the twigs would not
the introduction paragraph, instead of the beginning like a research paper. This formally will help to set up your paper to get your point across.
Introduction Hook Racism is part of human nature; we all judge the environment and people living in it under a personal lens. Therefore, our opinions on people are shaped by our views and values, which naturally leads to preferences to some over others. Background Information Past and Present(Obama’s speech) Therefore, two most motivational speeches were “I have a Dream” by Martin Luther King and “ The Gettysburg Address” by Abraham Lincoln. These two speeches were said by very important people
easier by toasting food fast, easily changing temperature and its portable. *Body/Quality One: transitional word Restate Quality- To begin, toasting food fast is one reason why a toaster is helpful in everyday life. Support (2 pieces)- When
In the second paragraph in the last three lines of the article is where the claim can be found. The claim basically, and of course paraphrasing, was “Title IX, which banned sexual discrimination on campuses, harassment jurisprudence-sometimes combined with other tenuous
dioxide and turns it into oxygen while animal cells doesn’t have a rigid cell wall. Cells are the main things in our bodies to maintain a healthy and working body. Animals and plants also need cells to work and function. This happens by active and passive transport. Plant and animals are all around us so it leads to one question, how should the mystery cell be classified? These next paragraphs would be determining how the mystery cell should be classified through method and claim, evidence, and justification
books and Adam bought me DVDs of American TV programs like Ugly Betty, which was about a girl with big braces and a big heart.”(I am Malala paragraph 15). This is important because