the body. Also, the first paragraph of the body does not have the topic sentence, so it makes readers confused about its main idea. In addition, some paragraphs have some sentences which do not support the main ideas. For example, paragraph two discusses native teachers’ characteristics but sentences five and six of it mention the unequal treatment between native and non-native English teachers. Moreover, the conclusion is not clear since it contains the ideas which are referred on the body paragraph
country is France. BODY PARAGRAPHS (3 TOTAL) Body Paragraph 1 1st main point why thesis is true (broad category): The first reason that France is the most interesting country in the world is because of the French culture. Specific details and evidence why this evidence supports thesis and main
When one first plays with a Jack-in-the-box toy, he or she winds it up slowly, knowing it will soon spring open. After multiple times using a Jack-in-the-box, one will begin to wind it up faster, conditioned to expect when the toy will open. Could all of humankind be its own individual Jack-in-the-box? Humans are wound up incessantly by the crank of society until the Jack of evil springs out of them. Humans are wound up faster and faster every time an evil act is committed. Humans are wound up more
High-mass in the stars means they live fast and die young, using fuel at a high rate to keep the high temperatures. And this causes the stars to eject hot radiation that is a blueish color. Repeat support until done: A red colored star is a part in the galaxy with some old stars. The high-mass stars are puffed and cooled, and after nothing happened to the low-mass stars, they both eject cool radiation that is a reddish color. Fact 1: A red/pink patched
will write a five-paragraph essay arguing whether or not Romeo and Juliet is a great love story or not. You will state your position, find evidence from the text, support that evidence with details, and create a conclusion. Introduction Paragraph 5 Sentences in Length 1st, 2nd, 3rd sentences – general overview of Romeo and Juliet 4th Sentence – why should reader care if it’s a great love story or not 5th Sentence – thesis statement (position on argument) Body Paragraphs 6-8 sentences in length
unknown. She gave her opinion about junk food based on her experiences. For example, in the first paragraph where the author started her sentence
going to explore the sea, but his mother in addition to his wife does not support his decision. Through the hard times as well as the difficulties, John Redding finally finds his way to sea. In the begging of the short story John Redding starts off as a young boy (at the age of ten) wanting to travel to sea. John spent his time throwing twigs into the St. John River, watching as the twigs sailed away to Jacksonville (paragraph 6. While watching the twigs he noticed that some of the twigs would not
the introduction paragraph, instead of the beginning like a research paper. This formally will help to set up your paper to get your point across.
Introduction Hook Racism is part of human nature; we all judge the environment and people living in it under a personal lens. Therefore, our opinions on people are shaped by our views and values, which naturally leads to preferences to some over others. Background Information Past and Present(Obama’s speech) Therefore, two most motivational speeches were “I have a Dream” by Martin Luther King and “ The Gettysburg Address” by Abraham Lincoln. These two speeches were said by very important people
easier by toasting food fast, easily changing temperature and its portable. *Body/Quality One: transitional word Restate Quality- To begin, toasting food fast is one reason why a toaster is helpful in everyday life. Support (2 pieces)- When