Analysis: Violent Media Is Good For Kids

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Project 1 I found my peers projects to be very well written and engaging. Some of my peers used very descriptive wording which I used in the first paragraph of my project. I found "Violent Media is good for kids" very interesting I love how he made it personal. "Long Overdue: A Reveiw of the Movie Juno" used formal diction meanwhile "Violent Media is Good for Kids" used more informal diction. I think the author of "Violent Media is Good for Kids" chose informal diction because he wanted to connect with the reader on a personal level. I like informal diction it feels more personal and less stiff. Project 2 Because I had never written a commentary I really liked "Are Jobs Obsolete?" because it showed me a good format for a commentary.
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