teacher” “An ideal teacher” essay focuses on who is an ideal teacher for English language learners, native or non-native teachers. Although it is a quite good essay, it still has some drawbacks. This essay will discuss the strengths as well as weaknesses of this given essay while suggesting some ways that can be taken in order to enhance this essay. It is undeniable that the essay has many strengths which readers need to learn to improve writing skills. First, it is an academic essay because it has reliable
small words that I do not need. In addition, to leave the words such as “thing and it”, as well as sentence fragments. As I become better and improve these writing problems, I will be able to have less errors on my future essays. Going over these weaknesses will allow me to elevate my quality of writing essays. Throughout my whole school career, I have always had problems brainstorming ideas for essay topics. I could never find a great topic that
portrayed as loyal, hard working, and self-motivated with the purpose to faithfully serve their families. They are inferior compared to other people and must obey what they are told to do. However, the tone and structure of each show the different attitudes the women have. With the tone and structure of the written works, Brady gives off a sarcastic tone which is seen in her diction while Kincaid displays the demanding nature of a
went and still go through today. Throughout the essay she creates a list based on all the things she feels that men take for granted and expect the women to do. Brady also repetitively uses the phrase, “I Want a…” to express the selfish and ignorance men have when it comes to looking for a women to marry. In my imitation, “I Want a Baby,” I wrote about a teacher who concludes that she wants a baby because of the benefits. Similar to Judy Brady’s essay, “I Want a Wife,” expressing an overall feminist
Name: ____________________________________ Date__________________________ TOC__________ ELA 2016-2017 Semester I Study Guide Directions: Provide a scholarly response to each question below. Please be sure that all answers are complete sentences with proper punctuation. Use an additional sheets of notebook paper if needed. Unit I: Debaters, Creators and Motivators Define alliteration and provide an example. the occurrence of the same letter or sound at the beginning of adjacent or closely connected
quixotic, messianic, and mongrel, all were used to describe complex details. Without those words one could not feel the true charismatic tone when describing the differences between the two. Also Lyer’s sentences structure that is long and involves lots of detail, allows one to connect with the essay on a more personal level. When Lyer uses examples such as, “ Elvis, James Town or Charles Manson”, allows a person to see how a weirdo can be different from an eccentric. One may not know what all of
to both structure and grammar. One of the first changes I will need to make is about my thesis statement. It does not include the three parts needed and it does not make a very strong argument. Another skill I will need to improve is the length of my paragraphs. Although my paragraphs make good points and follow along with their advanced organizers, they do not contain a sufficient amount of sentences. Next time I write, I will need to make sure each paragraph is at least eight sentences long. The
and ideas in a sentence. It is like the railway with which you transport our messages. Without it, like the train cannot move without railways, you won’t be able to use your ideas without a good command of the grammar patterns and structures of the language. However it is the better way to understand how we use words and components to form sentences. While writing an essay grammar plays a crucial role because it helps how to use punctuation and conjunction to make better sentences and helps to understand
Zinsser’s, “College Pressures,” he talks about one of the pressures plaguing college students is self-induced pressure. I was so determined to write essays of excellence that I made mental errors that brought my grade down. As I have progressed through school writing has been my Achilles heel. I was never fond of writing and always dreaded the idea of writing essays. I was never a strong writer because I did not fully understand the process of writing well-rounded papers. I always considered myself a subpar
The author E. B. White wrote the essay The Ring of Time in an attempt to “describe the indescribable” as he watches a fascinating scene of a young girl practicing for a performance in the circus. He feels as though he is obligated to record the events he is witnessing, and to convey this to his readers, however difficult this may be. After watching her magnificently ride around in the circus’ rings, the author sees a connection between the girl and her act. This brings about the author’s idea of