Personal Narrative: Improving My Writing

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In order to improve my writing, I will need to make a number of changes to both structure and grammar. One of the first changes I will need to make is about my thesis statement. It does not include the three parts needed and it does not make a very strong argument. Another skill I will need to improve is the length of my paragraphs. Although my paragraphs make good points and follow along with their advanced organizers, they do not contain a sufficient amount of sentences. Next time I write, I will need to make sure each paragraph is at least eight sentences long. The next skill I need to work on is my poor use of transitional phrases. My pretest essay has a severe lack of transitional phrases thus making the overall essay sound choppy. If

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