sentence that introduces my product/policy, the positives and negatives, or explains why I feel strongly about this product/policy 2) I have captured the reader’s interest in my essay by describing a story or scenario of the product/policy being used in the real world. 3) I have a creative transition sentence that introduces the topic of the next paragraph (the positive aspects) Have you ever felt your soccer shoes aren't good enough for you? Are you looking for the perfect shoes? Then you
the eulogy for the Charleston shooting victims “We're also guarding against the subtle impulse to call Johnny back for a job interview but not Jamal,” someone’s ethnicity can determine whether they get a job in America, which is one of the reasons why I disagree with Hurston’s argument that race should be considered insignificant. To some, such as Hurston, it makes sense to say that by ignoring the race issue in America we are just solving the problem, but that only makes the problem worse, and most
“Love is the most important thing in the world, but baseball is pretty good, too.” -Yogi Berra (Play). Love, the single most powerful emotion that humans can feel. Love is what people live for; Lives are spent looking for that one person, or thing that someone can connect with. When you find that one thing or person that you love you know it, and there is no mistaking it. For myself, baseball is the thing I love, and I know you guys are thinking, “here we go, another typical sports essay where all he
Everything I knew and got me interested was all from the articles and watching documentaries about kids that got thrown in jail their whole life for an accident or something they did that they weren’t fully aware of. However, recently my 15-year old cousin, Raphael who lives in London, got hit by an older kid. He is a boy with Raphael at school; they were talking about soccer teams when the boy got angry and hit Raphael. The boy broke two of Raphael’s
Hamilton, ON. He likes to play soccer and hockey and to go exploring. Destan has four people in his family. Scootering is fun, You can do it in the sun. It goes fast and slow, You can jump high and low. You can be a champ,