So I Ain T No Good Girl By Sharon Flake

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Who Is She Without Him? Have you ever had boy problems? This short story is about a girl who has major boy problems. “So I Ain`t No Good Girl” is written by Sharon Flake. This story is about a girl who has problems with her boyfriend and girls at her bus stop. She has a couple of close encounters with them but this problem is way worse. Her boyfriend cheated with the girl at her bus stop. Sharon Flake wrote a story that lacks detail including the characters names, the conflicts, and how the conflicts were resolved.…show more content…
In this story the narrators name is never given out which could be confusing when you don’t have anyone’s name. On page two it states “I should I say going for the one with the red hair and run over shoes.” The author also includes “I trip over my own two feet. The good girls laugh- all four of `em.” on page two. In the story Flake never mentions the names of the girls who stand at her bus stop. “Me and them girls been standing on the same corner waiting for the same bus for a year now and I don’t even know their names.” is stated on page one. Being that there is more than one girl and none of the names were given it was extremely confusing at times. Flake uses “his eyes crawl over one of them good girls like worms sliding across wet dirt.” The author could fix some things dealing with the characters
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