CAUSE EFFECT ESSAY OUTLINE (Increased Rate of Road Accident in Malaysia)
A. Hook / attention getter
When economic growth, the population increased in our country and at the same time the number of people who has a vehicle also increased. Number of accident cases in Malaysia also has been increased day by day. In everyday, there had many people had died in the road accident.
B. General statement
According to the data that have made by Bukit Aman Traffic Unit in 2014, statistic shows that had an increased in accident cases than the data in 2013 which is 62 519 increased to 65 883 cases.
C. Thesis statement
Based on rating road accidents happened, there were influenced by a several factors. Legislation should give more attention so that the cases could be…show more content… Sub-supporting point 2
Drivers who are in a drunk condition will be more dangerous to the other users. It is because drug and alcohol use while driving is an obvious predictor of road traffic accident.
2. Supporting point 2
Secondly, road accidents also can influence by the road constraints. The condition of the road sometimes risk to driver involved in accident.
a. Sub- supporting point 1
In addition, we had known with the news that a few cases accident that occurred at the LPT 2. When a staff of government such as works Department (JKR) make a research again, the road constraint was the most factors that cause the accident happened.
I. Sub- sub supporting point
There were many holes along the roads and this condition will endanger to motorcyclist. Moreover, those who bike at the late of night, they might not see the holes and this situation would be more risky to them.
B. Transition paragraph
1. Summary / conclusion
The causes of road accidents were just not by human attitude driver and road constraints but there were many other factors that influence in this accident cases.
2. Transitional sentence
However, the road accidents that causes by a few factors led to various