Enlightenment And Scientific Revolution

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So, my paper did not have many noted errors when I glanced at it other than the two my classmate made when reviewing it. From there I decided to go over the process of writing the paper and what strategies I incorporate in the paper would be the most successful and what wouldn’t be. Once I developed the idea of what I would be writing in, I began to develop my thesis. Originally I made my thesis way to broad. Instead of focusing on two specific individuals I chose the Enlightenment and Scientific Revolution in whole! This clearly was too broad to emphasize what my paper would specifically be focusing on so I chose two notable figures from each time period. The two I chose were Newton and Diderot. The new thesis I created made my paper flow
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