This feels refreshing. It’s nice to see a strong, central female protagonist drive the story. The goal is clear and the stakes are very high. There’s a solid inciting event when Melisa shoots the wrong person, igniting public protest. There are themes about trust and reconnecting. All of these elements have merit. It’s definitely a good setup for a story with conflict, tension, moral choices, and character transformation. There’s a three-act structure and for the most part the story is goal-oriented