evidence of when or where the conference was held. There is not enough evidence to convince her audience of whether or not this anecdote is reliable and creditable information. Dosh also talks about different people in her essay like, Darren Heitner, who is a writer for the Sports Agent Blog. She includes his stance on allowing agents to pay the athletes to give her stance a more reliable background from other sources which is very successful. She paraphrases everyone’s statements into her own words