build the thesis, and make sure that she gives enough explanation to all the points that she wants to convey. The sections flow together, connecting to the previous passage, but clearly separate the main points in her thesis. The first section, “Skin Shows”, focuses on the shallowness of the monsters of today, and the subsequent sections dive deeper into what makes the monsters of today shallow. “Gothic Gnomes” and “Perversion and Parasites” focuses on race themes and how they manifested, while the
Halberstam writes in regards to the female body, “[There is a] perverse sexuality by first showcasing the temptations of the flesh in glorious Technicolor and then by depicting so-called normal sex as sickly enterprise devoid of all passion” (17). Halberstam’s point is reflected in the scene between Freddy and Nancy. The passion has been taken out and there is just the focus on the fleshy aspect. The gothic monstrosity of Freddy takes the fears inside the girl’s head, manifested in her dreams, and turns