grade for "The Challanger Explosion" Organization: 3 - Introduction does not really have a a single thesis statement, but throughout the paper many of the ideas mentioned in the introduction paragraph are discussed later on. Development: 4 Clarity: 3 - For some sentences, I had to reread so I would understand them. Concepts: 3 1) Essay retells a chronological event of historical importance - No, I felt as if the essay was told in random order or told backwards. The paper should have started with
(Cite paper). At some point in their life many people will have sleep disturbances. Between 30% and 50% of the population will