Tatiana Adjeare's Review
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I feel that Tatiana Adjeare’s review of my work warrants a grade of a B. She deserves this grade because of her obvious thoughtful reflection on the unity and cohesion of my paper, word usage, and critiques of my transitions. Tatiana made sure she stressed the importance of unity and cohesion to me. She precisely communicated to me at which points in my essay she thought I was going on a tangent or that the flow of my paper was off. This was very helpful once I revised my paper. She additionally helped me with word usage and choice, noticing that I could be repetitive at times. She urged me to change this by looking at a thesaurus for words that would more accurately depict what I was trying to say. Finally, she also brought up that at