O’Flaherty and Nadine Gordimer are equally credited. Catching the attention with heart racing phrases such as “YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED” and “the enemy”, both authors of such intellect create the effect of surprise. The authors use key literary elements in creating suspense to add to the effect of surprise. The authors use elements such as imagery, pacing of events, and foreshadowing leading to a surprise ending. Imagery greatly contributed to the feeling of suspense throughout reading the two stories. Firstly