Disappearance On The Treaty Of Versailles
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Looking at both papers, I can tell that they were written excellent. Both stated their stance on the Treaty of Versailles. Their papers contained many historical facts and quotes supporting their stance, which in both was supporting the signing of the treaty. Their stance on the matter was also stated early, there was no second guessing on what they believed in, and at the end of the paper they wrapped up their views in a strong closing paragraph. Looking at my paper which received a C+ I can see why I got my grade, I wrote about the wrong subject. My paper was on “How do you govern/organize a country in this new independent world?” while the example papers were about supporting or not supporting the Treaty of Versailles if you were a senator