Sonny's Blues Thesis
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Miriam,
The topic sentence of your first paragraph does an excellent job of not only stating your thesis, but also posing the question of “what exactly happens when our decision is questioned and completely disapproved of by one of our a family member’s and why does this all happen in the first place?” (Meriam). The posed question aids in transitioning the first paragraph into to the following analysis in a flowing and easy to understand manner. I enjoy the way that you described James Baldwin’s fashion of telling the story “Sonny’s Blues” as, “precisely presents this situation and takes a deeper view in which how human beings deal with their suffering within life struggles due to misunderstandings” (Miriam). It is also helpful to the reader